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tranvutuan
06-10-2010, 02:10 AM
This is the paragraph about my Objective from my resume. I need some advices for it,pls. Do you think it is too long

To secure a position as a Software Design in Company A where my outstanding success in team projects, involving design and implementation of software, as well as proven ability to deliver high quality projects on-time will contribute to the Implementation, testing and support of innovative products

Thanks

tranvutuan
06-14-2010, 12:15 PM
This is the paragraph about my Objective from my resume. I need some advices for it,pls. Do you think it is too long

Thanks

Any ideas ???

Tsveta
06-16-2010, 03:53 PM
I don't think it is too long. Actually you can write a couple of more sentences.