FreshFrost
02-10-2008, 09:19 PM
I want to use the term "logical-minded" in my resume because it's just the right number of syllables to get the sentence's rhythm right. See, I can't use "logical" and slip in an extra adjective without it sounding like a list, and I can't just use "logical" by itself without sounding rather curt and abrupt.
But every time I type out "logical-minded", the alarms bells go off in my head screaming it's too colloquial.
... So is it?
Or is my brain just having a melt-down from doing the nth+1 redraft of my resume? ...
(And does anyone else sweat over absolutely ridiculous stuff like sentence rhythm when writing their resumes, like I do? :( ...)
But every time I type out "logical-minded", the alarms bells go off in my head screaming it's too colloquial.
... So is it?
Or is my brain just having a melt-down from doing the nth+1 redraft of my resume? ...
(And does anyone else sweat over absolutely ridiculous stuff like sentence rhythm when writing their resumes, like I do? :( ...)